Darkness has fallen
Wan moonlight glow
Landscape glistens
Fresh-fallen snow
A whiff of smoke
Invades my nose
I follow the scent
Unsure where it goes
The smell leads me
To a bridge afire
Oppressive heat
Makes me perspire
Through angry flames
I see you there
Piercing me with
A bitter glare
I peer into your
Fierce green irides
Your grim resolve
Brings me to my knees
Tears flow freely
As flames draw near
The blaze gives birth
To my deepest fear
Though we are through
I manage to see
The beauty within
This grim tragedy
What once was our bond
Has been sauted
I watch weakly
While you walk away
Mental Defecation 
I’m all out of sense…errr…cents. 😀 Love this.
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I don’t have sense or cents either!
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Burning bridges and glaring green eyes, you my friend are a wordsmith, and I ain’t telling lies.
🙂
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Thank you, my dear.
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I know this was all Deep and stuff, but honestly, I’m cold and I just want to snuggle up to the fire…
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Me, too.
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Very evocative. Love these lines – Tears flow freely/ As flames draw near/ The blaze gives birth / To my deepest fear
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Thank you!
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Hi Twindaddy, thanks for your yeah write submission. If you’d like to participate in the voting and the writing contest, please fill out the entry form: http://yeahwrite.me/yeah-write-november-writing-contest-entry-form/
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Nate
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I’ve read some of your poetry before, and you do very well at evoking a deep and melancholy reaction.
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Thank you so much!
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Dude. You have the talents. Big huge ones.
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Thank you, ma’am.
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It’s true. So true.
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This is fabulous, provocative and evocative.
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Thank you!
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