Written by Serins and TD
Ice cold water down my spine
Stripped bare and naked
Fuck you I’m not fine!
Judgement fills your vacant eyes
Raging hatred undisguised
You will never understand
Demons cave not to demands
Cold eyes
Deathly stare
Do you think I actually care?
I’m tired of your thoughtless action
My worth to you reduced to fractions
Bitter words incite a chain reaction
Emotion!
Commotion!
Explosion!
Tears erupting
Thought disrupting
Furious storm
This is the norm
You choke my heart!
Bleed me to death?
What the fuck have I done?
This isn’t fun!
I kind-of didn’t want to hit like on this. -Hugs- Very well written though.
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Hey! I hit “like” on your sad ones!! 😉
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I still liked it!
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Yay!
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Thank you.
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new format of poem…nice…but a bit sad..
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Well, I think we did our job if we made you feel.
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No doubt about that…both of you are much too talented to fail..
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Thank you.
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As always…my pleasure..
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🙂 Thank you.
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*curls lip* No good feelings here. Good writing, that’s all.
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Thank you, dearest Lizzi.
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Thanks Lizzi.
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Dr Seuss, the darker years? Also, fuck feelings. Sometimes.
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Hmm…. feelings that is what poetry is for.
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Ha! Feelings can be a ginormous pain in the ass.
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