In a dank room lit by candle’s flare
The clerics gather to anoint this pair
The prophesied twins had been born
From mortal womb they had been torn
One boy, one girl, our race to lead
From human forms they shall be freed
Conceived and carried by impure flesh
But godly in their forms afresh
They drink the nectar from our veins
Wisdom, immortality are their gains
Baptized and cleansed in blood divine
An ancient ritual in hallowed shrine
Recited chant rebirths our gods
Restores our faith, destroys facades
Corpses burn over searing coals
While our overlords replace their souls
Inspired by this week’s poetry prompt at The Reverie.
interesting…. very interesting…..
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Is that good or bad?
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Good.. 🙂
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It sourt of reminds me of of Star-Wars cross with something…. 🙂 But I love it.
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Not sure why, but I’m not getting all comment notifications from this site. Boo.
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🙂 Seems this one is also giving you glitches…. hmmmm a gremlin has chewed up your PC wires.
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Blast!
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This could be the beginning of an epic story. 😀
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Right? I was totally thinking that afterward…
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I like it!It’s very different 🙂
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Thank you!
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this is feeling very luke and leah to me…
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They didn’t have their souls replaced….that I know of.
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no… but they had to keep the family dark side out of their souls.
creative license…
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Hmmmmm….I got the idea of twins from my twins, actually. I the thought of Luke and Leia surprisingly never entered my head.
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i figured your twins were the real inspiration but there seems to be some subliminal star wars. 🙂
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Does it hurt my nerdcred that you saw this and I did not?
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That was awesome.
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Thanks!
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Really terrific!
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Thank you!
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The rebirth of twindaddy. may the force be without us so we stay pure and sane.
light sabres replaced by candy canes
Very star wars very twindaddy. 🙂
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Agree with the above comments – I first thought of Babies A & B, but when you mentioned that the twins were a boy and a girl, I then went Luke & Leia.
It sounds a bit like a cross between Star Wars and Dracula, if you ask me… Or some other dark twisted fantasy saga type thing.
Maybe you should go ahead and continue with this universe?
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I may do just that. Though I am working on a different story offline that I hope to finish.
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Well, make a note somewhere of this and it can be the next project when you’ve finished that one. Keep your inspiration fired up, and keep on writing. 🙂
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Will do!
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Save this to be you next project, maybe?
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Ooohh. Ahhh. Some eerie interesting stuff. And yeah it does seem like something out of star wars.
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Really? That’s totally not what I was going for…lol.
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Lol
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Creepily captivating!
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Thanks!
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